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so this is the start of a story that's been percolating inside my brain for the longest time and gave a shot at writing it, I've already finished the prologue and the first chapter too which I will be posting, if you guys like it let me know what you think :la:

Chapter 01: Here
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Her grey eyes remained glued to the dark sky above as the dawn began to brake, for that moment she felt and odd calming sense over her as she watched the sky change from night to morning.

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This sentence sounds awkward.
Read it aloud and see.
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Good start.