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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Twenty
Work would then come and take over my life, with the passing months, and the thrill that was the Christmas holiday. Gathering individuals whom of which wished for me a happy new year. Yet in the coming late winter two men once again returned to give me rather shocking news. That hit like an ice-cold wave filled with information I could not comprehend that came from the mouth of Sevastyan Belikov, while his tall companion Ivan remained quiet in all of this.
“I’m sorry, Sevastyan, but could you please repeat that, I seem to have misheard you. Just what was that again?”
The Russian man scoffed. “I tell you some spectacular and that what you respond with?”
“I haven’t seen you for months,” I told him blankly. “And you come bursting in here telling something so crazy that I couldn’t comprehend. So, could you care to repeat it once more just so I can tell my own hearing wasn’t tricking me?”
He gave a short laugh before re
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Two (Edited)
“What have you done Edmond?” I demanded him after I rushed over to my mother’s cold and lifeless body, my mind told me she was dead, but my heart did not wish it to be true. I looked back down to my mother, ignoring the man who stood above me like the lingering shadow of death, as I griped my mother’s shoulders with all that I had and began to shake her.
“Mother no!” I cried. “Mother please, speak to me!”
Tears clouded my vision, threatening to fall, a moment passed, then another and my beloved mother showed no signs of life. But I was able to tell almost instantly with how her skin grew cold against the warmth of my own as I stared helplessly to the lifeless body that was my mother. My hands continued to clutch her shoulders, shaken with grief over the realization as I sobbed, first my father, then my older brother, and now it was my mother. Everyone I loved so dearly was now dead. And leaving me utterly alone in the world.
I continued t
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter One (Edited)
My dear reader, hello to you, you and whoever else it is that is with you.
You are probably wondering who I am.
Well if you were not you certainly would not have picked up this book and began reading it, now would you? Though I suppose I cannot blame you, for if I was you I would probably do the very same as you are now as you stand in your local book store looking for something to read, something that will undoubtedly catch your eye no matter what the story may be.
But this is no story that you are reading, this is my life.
My very life is in your hands right now.
You may laugh about it, maybe even think of it as a joke, but to me this is no joke, for what I have gone through, what I have witnessed in my so ever prolonged life, is something that I could never even joke about no matter how much I’d wish to.
For you see, I am a vampire, an immortal being that cannot die, who must drink the blood of the living so I may live another night.
Go ahead, roll your eyes, think to yourself
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Nineteen
With all the books I took from home, this was the one had to forget about. The one book which held my mother’s family history. Sometimes my own idiocy was utterly astounding.
“That belonged to my mother, it’s her family history. Or, I should say, my family history.” I told Mercedes as she looked at the cover. “But it has some things in there that some might not consider proud to have.”
“Murderer in the family?” Mercedes offered.
“Not exactly, it isn’t something I really talk about since my mother asked me not to speak of it in fear of people hating me.”
Mercedes frowned like a disapproving mother. “Now that’s ridicules, why should you or your mother be hated over something like that?”
She was right, it made no sense why I or my mother would be hated for something that my great grandfather did that wasn’t his choice to do. To kill people under the King’s order, then again after the Revolution
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Eighteen
Two days had passed since I had visited my home, two days had passed since I had to come to the ultimate conclusion of what Alexandrie was ultimately after. If Edmond was alight with it, I would have little to no objections. Well, mostly.
But since her incessant bothering had reached all of our last nerves Alexandrie was ultimately put under a form of house arrest. Or at least, sleep arrest if you could call it. Having her on a strict time schedule of when she would go to bed and leave the rest of us night dwellers in peace. It was something she needed. What I needed.
And it seemed to work somewhat. Her agitation seemed to lessen, but only a bit. But soon that would change, whether Alexandrie wanted it or not. I could only hope it to be soon.
But my initial thoughts were broken when the door to my office came almost crashing open and in stepped a woman I honestly didn’t expect to see. One of which I hadn’t seen for several months. Yet it was more of a welcome sight t
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Seventeen
In the coming month Alexandrie continued to visit Edmond and I under the pretence of catching up, much to the distained of the maids who worked at his home. Even though I was at the bank she would try to speak to me, pester me with her complaints in how Edmond always avoided her but not me. I would tell her plainly that it was for the fact that Edmond was my family now, and she more of a friend. As well as the fact that he and I worked in the same bank so it would make sense that he wouldn’t avoid me.
The weather had begun to turn cold, the summer winds slowly proceeding to autumn, as more and more work with the German’s grew. When several German soldiers passed through I would speak to them in their tongue, many of which were rather impressed. Including that of a German business man who would often speak to head of management.
Yet there was always someone who would catch my eye whenever I came to bank, it was a girl, probably no older then I, with medium brown hair in a br
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Louise a Vampire's Story Chapter Sixteen
I had never spoken of this woman, at least not by name until now. Not because I had forgotten, but for it was not all that important at the time.
Alexandrie Beauchêne was the daughter of a rather wealthy jewelry maker, who grew from poverty from the late 1800’s after the Revolution. She was the woman my older brother Arthur was supposed to marry before his untimely, and unjust death. Though Alexandrie would often visit my mother and I, she would mainly speak with my mother, not to mention she and I held really nothing in common.
I liked books, she liked frilly dresses and the latest fashion trends. I was a timid, shy girl, she was outgoing and a grand socialite. But considering her family it was no surprise. I held no ill towards her and she would often try to get me out of my shell and into the world.
She also seemed to hold a keen interest in Edmond, but many women did so it was no surprise, the one thing that bothered me about that however was the engagement between her a
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Hello, everyone! Hatsune Miku-17 (Waving) 

It's been a while since I've posted a journal, mainly since I've been working hard on my stories, but it's mainly Louise a Vampire's Story that I have been focusing greatly on, while working on The Winter Witch and FrAcTuReD Part 2 in the background. But that brings me to the update, with Louise's story I've had to backtrack and fix some things that had been bothering me for some time. and have decided to do some slight re-vamping (pardon the pun) to fix some errors that have been present while also trying to add a bit more, like the city Louise is in and where in France. all the while as I continue the story in where it's headed, where two major things are about to happen, I won't say what it is because spoilers but you guys are more then welcome to speculate.
But it got me wondering, with me doing this editing, would you guys want me to post the edited version up as well, or just keep posting chapters as is? I wouldn't be taking the original chapters down at all, if anything it can show the differences, but I wanted to see if you guys would like that at all.
So far I've only edited three chapters and am now working on chapter 20 of the book. or if you guys have any questions for me.
Either way, let me know in the comments so I know what you guys think!
This post was a bit of a ramble but I hope it got my point across, it's been a while since I've posted something in a journal ^^;
Still, I hope all of you are well, and have a good day! Lovely Shoujo Emoji (Huggy Hug) [V2] 

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suyuku-san Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Professional Writer
I just realized that chapters 7-8 of Louise a Vampire's Story is missing!! 😨 I don't even know that happened but I'll be sure to fix it when I get home. So sorry about this... 😬
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